Essay Editing

Sample Edit

Here's a sample of an essay paragraph as submitted.

Finishing one’s life in a state of confusion is a terrifying thought. Thus it is with Charles Wright’s poem in which images of death and birth are intertwined in a dance of death. It’s the loss of control as one slides into oblivion, unable to prepare oneself for the next transition and losing already the memories that sustain a life well lived.

The brain is the organ of thought and learning. Even people with a relatively unsophisticated knowledge of learning understand this. New techniques of functional Magnetic Resonance Imaging (fMRI) allow us to view activation of specific regions of the brain during cognitive processes.

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Using the "Track Changes" tool in MS Word, the HyperGraphix editor revises the paragraph. All the changes are kept in the document, so the client can review them at the end of the process. The document returned to the client appears like the one below.
The client can then review the changes one by one, and accept or reject each, or select "Accept All" to save a clean document with all changes. This screen shot is from a Macintosh computer; Windows versions may differ slightly.